During my meeting with Olivia, she helped me to make my thesis stronger and expand it into two stronger sentences, focusing more on my opinion than just the evidence from the writings. She also helped me to cite my sources correctly within my paper and helped me to cite the UNE CAS Handbook correctly in my worked cited. Working with Olivia helps me to focus my ideas, even with her minor fixes. She has helped me to expand on my ideas and create stronger sentences. She has also helped me to develop my opinion more within my paper. Olivia is also very good at talking through problems, even minor, within the paper and working with me to change the issues. Regardless if this was extra credit or not, I would have still met with Olivia about my paper because I find out meetings helpful.
