During my meeting with Olivia, she helped me to make my thesis stronger and more clear. It now incorporates my idea of s fifth metagenre. She also helped me to see that my work on metagenres was stronger than I had thought. I thought that was my weaker area of the paper, but she helped me see that it was not. Olivia also worked through some of my peer’s comments with me that I was having trouble with comprehending to see what comments could be useful, and which ones were not. She gave me ideas on how to incorporate more of my idea of a fifth metagenre and where it would fit best in my writing. I still have to tweak my conclusion from editing my paper, but we did talk about my conclusion as well. Working with Olivia really has helped me to set up my writing and definitely feel better about it. Being able to meet with someone throughout this semester other than a teacher or peer is really useful.
