In my conference with Olivia, I first read her my essay out loud. I listened to myself for mistakes as she listened to my ideas. She helped me to make my introduction paragraph stronger by combining a part of my second with it. I then combined the remaining of my second with my third. She also helped guide me to create a conclusion with the correct ideas and set up. This meeting was very helpful to me. Speaking with Olivia made me more confident about my paper and I think made my paper overall, stronger.
