**The format is off due to how Portfolio formats it**
Works Cited
Dweck, Carol. “Transcript of ‘The Power of Believing That You Can Improve.’” TED, www.ted.com/talks/carol_dweck_the_power_of_believing_that_you_can_improve/transcript.
Haidt, Greg Lukianoff and Jonathan. “How Trigger Warnings Are Hurting Mental Health on Campus.” The Atlantic, Atlantic Media Company, 31 July 2017, www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2015/09/the-coddling-of-the-american-mind/399356/.
Roth, Michael S. “Don’t Dismiss ‘Safe Spaces’.” The New York Times, The New York Times, 29 Aug. 2019, www.nytimes.com/2019/08/29/opinion/safe-spaces-campus.html.
Signal Phrasing
During her TED Talk, you can tell Dweck is a big advocate for spreading the concept of having a growth mindset since she gives examples of phrases like “I love a challenge” and “You know, I was hoping this would be informative.”
Dweck says that these people “…run from the error. They don’t engage with it.”
One with an Ellipses and one with a Bracket
Dweck says that these people “…run from the error. They don’t engage with it.”
During her TED Talk, you can tell Dweck is a big advocate for spreading the concept of having a growth mindset since she gives examples of phrases like “I love a challenge” and “You know, I was hoping this [lesson] would be informative.”
These tools allow you to cut out unnecessary information and also add words in brackets to make the quote make sense in the context you’re writing in.
Two Quotes in my Draft
Dweck says that these people “..run from the error. They don’t engage with it.”
My favorite quote from Roth is: “Like families, campus cultures are different, but all should promote a basic sense of inclusion and respect that enables students to learn and grow – to be open to ideas and perspectives so that the differences they encounter are educational.”
Revise the Setup
?? not sure how else to lead into this : Dweck says that these people “..run from the error. They don’t engage with it.”
I think this is an important quote from Roth, “Like families, campus cultures are different, but all should promote a basic sense of inclusion and respect that enables students to learn and grow – to be open to ideas and perspectives so that the differences they encounter are educational.”
